First Line Friday: March 24th, 2017

I love the first line of a book. Sometimes they’re great and sometimes they’re real stinkers. Because of my love for them, I decided to join in First Line Fridays by Wandering Words. Hope you enjoy!

First Lines Fridays is a weekly feature for book lovers hosted by Wandering Words. What if instead of judging a book by its cover, its author or its prestige, we judged it by its opening lines?  If you want to make your own post, feel free to use or edit the banner above, and follow the rules below:

  • Pick a book off your shelf (it could be your current read or on your TBR) and open to the first page
  • Copy the first few lines, but don’t give anything else about the book away just yet – you need to hook the reader first
  • Finally… reveal the book!

If you’re using Twitter, don’t forget to use #FirstLinesFridays!

 

“The day Alice met the twins her life changed forever.”

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And the book is:

The Stone Keeper by June Wilson

“The day Alice met the twins her life changed for ever. Not like the day she cut her hair off and hated it. Or the even the day her father told her she had to spend six months in Australia. No, this was a big change, a huge change – almost, you could say, an impossible one. Because it was the day she got mixed up in Middengard. The day she stepped into the prophecy. Not that she knew that. Not then.”

Fifteen year-old Alice Morgan is homesick and miserable, out of place with her rich relatives in Melbourne. All she wants to do is return to England and solve the mystery of her mother’s disappearance.

But you should be careful what you wish for. When Alice is unwittingly lured to Melbourne’s Shrine of Remembrance, she finds herself in Middengard, a realm hidden from the world of men and peopled by an ancient warrior race, the Hilderinc. To make matters worse, her cousin Toby and her annoying friend Jess have followed her, putting their own lives in jeopardy.

Placing her trust in the aloof girl-warrior Iris and Iris’s father Stanor, Alice is astonished to learn that the pendant left to her by her mother is one of the Doom Stones, powerful stones needed to protect both Middengard and the world of men from destructive forces.

Soon Alice, Toby and Jess become embroiled in a battle to help the Hilderinc defeat one of their own, a rebel intent on upsetting the balance of power. But how does Alice’s mother fit in? As Alice learns more about Middengard and her part in it, she has to make the hardest choice of her life: rescue her mother or save Toby and Jess.


This is my current read. When I read the first line, it made me a little curious. Why did her life change forever? And who are the twins? I don’t think it’s the best first line ever, but it did propel me to read further on so I’d say it did it’s job.

What do you think of this first line?

4 thoughts on “First Line Friday: March 24th, 2017

  1. Yeah, I’s say that is the kind of first line that makes you read on to find out more. 🙂 First lines are like the first impression to a book and are so important. I think this one succeeds at what it is meant to do and grabs the reader right off the bat. 🙂

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